writing assigment

Coherence is product of many different factors, which combine to make every paragraph, every sentence, and every phrase contribute to the meaning of the whole piece. Coherence in writing is much more difficult to sustain than coherent speech simply because writers have no nonverbal clues to inform them if their message is clear or not. Therefore, writers must make their patterns of coherence much more explicit and much more carefully planned. Coherence itself is the product of two factors — paragraph unity and sentence cohesion.

descriptive paragraph (describing my self)

my self ( Eny Tri Fatmawati)

i will describe myself self, narated all about i am in general that is hobby, my habit and etc another person passes this article.my is name is eny tri fatmawati usually at call eny, i born at ssebuah little village that is village mulyosari, in 24 aprils 1994, now my age 19 year and i am going levels education 1 (s1) at university muhammadiyah metro at teachership faculty and education science english department semester 4 and at metro i live menyebuah boarding house at 38 b. i am first child from three childs in my family. my father name munjiat and my mother name sutilah, my parents origin is java precisely at east java at village tulung great initially my father only has emigrated at lampung but now live  at lampung my parents love me so much. i am a sweet girl and pretty. heavy my body is 45 kg and tall my body is 165 cm. my blood group is a, i have thick eyebrow and beautiful eye. my nose. i have thick lip and sweet smile. my complexion is young chocolate. i use jilbab. i am very good, beautiful, patient, timid with other my friends. speak about hobby, my hobby is listens music, watch film and read novel. music i take a fancy to music romantic, i my korean movies often watch it with friends so much. that's myself description. my name is eny tri fatmawati a cutie and sweet. i have best matter in life i. that about education. i luck has parents very give top priority education for my the child is grateful can continue my education because outside there a lot can not continue the education because economy condition. thank to allah, because rahmat- and luck that given to me because i have parents love me so much and very pay attention the children education. i shall promise to to make happy my parents will not make dissapointed my parents.

IDENTIFICATION

TITTLE :  my self ( eny tri fatmawati )

INTRODUCTION

i will describe myself self, narated all about i am in general that is hobby, my habit and etc another person passes this article.

BODY PARAGRAF

my is name is eny tri fatmawati usually at call eny, i born at ssebuah little village that is village mulyosari, in 24 aprils 1994, now my age 19 year and i am going levels education 1 (s1) at university muhammadiyah metro at teachership faculty and education science english department semester 4 and at metro i live menyebuah boarding house at 38 b.

DESCRIPTION

i am first child from three childs in my family. my father name munjiat and my mother name sutilah, my parents origin is java precisely at east java at village tulung great initially my father only has emigrated at lampung but now live  at lampung my parents love me so much. i am a sweet girl and pretty. heavy my body is 45 kg and tall my body is 165 cm. my blood group is a, i have thick eyebrow and beautiful eye. my nose. i have thick lip and sweet smile. my complexion is young chocolate. i use jilbab. i am very good, beautiful, patient, timid with other my friends. speak about hobby, my hobby is listens music, watch film and read novel. music i take a fancy to music romantic, i my korean movies often watch it with friends so much. that's myself description. my name is eny tri fatmawati a cutie and sweet. i have best matter in life i. that about education. i luck has parents very give top priority education for my the child is grateful can continue my education because outside there a lot can not continue the education because economy condition.

CONCLUDING

thank to allah, because rahmat- and luck that given to me because i have parents love me so much and very pay attention the children education. i shall promise to to make happy my parents will not make dissapointed my parents.

assigment writing meeting 2

* definition coherence*

Coherence is product of many different factors, which combine to make every paragraph, every sentence, and every phrase contribute to the meaning of the whole piece. Coherence in writing is much more difficult to sustain than coherent speech simply because writers have no nonverbal clues to inform them if their message is clear or not. Therefore, writers must make their patterns of coherence much more explicit and much more carefully planned. Coherence it self is the product of two factors - paragraph unity and sentence cohesion. 

example :

My Self

 

my is name is eny tri fatmawati usually at call eny, i born at village mulyosari, in 24 aprils 1994, now my age 19 years and i am going levels education 1 (s1) at university muhammadiyah metro and at metro i live menyebuah boarding house at 38 b. i am a sweet girl and pretty. heavy my body is 45 kg and tall my body is 165 cm. i have thick eyebrow and beautiful eye. my nose. i have thick lip and sweet smile. my complexion is young chocolate. i use jilbab. i am very good, beautiful, patient, timid with other my friends. i am first child from three childs in my family. my parents is love me so much. i have best matter in life i. that about education. i luck can continue my education because outside there a lot can not continue the education because economy condition. thank to allah, because rahmat- and luck that given to my parents. speak about hobby, my hobby is listens music, watch film and read novel. music i take a fancy to music romantic, i my korean movies often watch it with friends so much. that's myself description. my name is eny tri fatmawati a cutie and sweet.